作品标题:当白鸥飞向蓝天,鲜花会挂满枝头
作品介绍:大雨撒向加州土地,我记录下了希望的季节——春的复苏
作者:榴莲糕
评委留言:
Allie: These shots are great! I love the timing and composition of the second picture! The birds fill up the- what would’ve been negative space, the person in the sand in the middle, and a sailboat on either side of them. I also love the color, it’s a great balance of blue and black, it makes the image even more satisfying than it is. The first photo’s composition could be tightened up, the tree branch is a distraction to the mountain. To frame the mountain better, shift to the left so your foreground isn’t competing with your subject.
Junxi: Great composition and timing on the second picture. But the background and foreground compete against each other in the first picture, and the extra branches are kind of distracting.
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: 这两张都好看 这两张都好看