作品标题："Between Drives and Stillness"
作品介绍：这组三张照片拍摄于夏威夷的冬假期间，记录的是“移动”与“停留”之间的状态：车内向前延伸的公路、空旷草地上孤立的车辆，以及俯视港口的成排船只。它们分别对应旅途中的行进、短暂的停靠，以及最终的远望。对我来说，这个假期并不是关于目的地，而是关于在岛屿空间中不断切换视角的过程。公路、陆地与海洋构成了夏威夷独特的尺度感，也让时间在移动中被拉长。
作者：小蛋
评委留言：
Allie: The lines could be cleaned up a bit nice; the first photo the horizon is not completely straight and there is a lot of negative space at the top. If you wanted to accentuate the ocean, you could have less sky and more of the boats. Or even, a different angle to show more of the oceans lines. The second photo is the same, a bit too much negative space at the top, it takes away from your subject, leading their eyes down slower. I love the leading lines of the second and third! Even though the third picture is a portati the way it’s frames makes it feel landscape, and I love the frame within a frame composition technique.
Junxi: The subjects are interesting and the colors look nice.
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