“George therefore re-inherited P2 but it was valuable points lost for both team and driver in the World Championship(p4)”
P2意味着63给自己和车队赢了18个积分,开赢了其它20个车手。别再东亚教育自己的车手了。
另外,我从小学英语就知道句子要加对主语哈,别说的像63 “re-inherited(继承了)” P2之后毁了你们梅奔一样。
建议改成 George therefore returned and finished the race in P2, gained 18 points in the Driver's standing and the Constructors'(GR#63 回到了P2位置,并在此位置完成了比赛,为自己和车队在积分榜上获得18分。)
However, reliability issue cause the DNF of Kimi, and this was valuable points lost for both team and driver in the World Championship(不过,可靠性问题导致了Kimi退赛,这对于车手和车队都是严重的损失。)
梅奔如果你PR就只有这个水平可以雇我哈,正好还没找到合适的工作。